Apparently I need a better mic.
So, the main things wrong with this are my mic and just the animation work itself.
Give the animator more time to actually come up with good animation to work with the voice overs.
Would have more impact when you do memory type things to actually make it a flashback instead of it using the same images as everything else.
Hahaha, nice work.
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